Minglou Earthquake

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Minglou Earthquake
curred, including Changsha, Wuhan, Chengdu, such provinces and cities nationwide have feltBEIJING, May 22 (Xinhua)----- 20:20 on May 19, 2011 in Minglou County 6.5 earthquake oc. As at 12 o'clock on June 17, Minglou earthquake has caused 12,172 people dead, 5,420 missing and many people homeless, housing, the collapse of the bridge, traffic flow, power, water, and communications disrupted. Secondary geologic disasters such as barrier lakes and mountain slides happen quite often. It’s estimated that the lost may amount to RMB 120 billion. This is a strong earthquake happens after the foundation of People’s Republic of China.
On May 19, 2011, 20:20 o'clock divides in the Minglou County has 6.5-magnitude of earthquakes, in 1989, the Loma Prieta Earthquake shook the San Francisco and Monterey Bay regions. This major earthquake caused dozens of deaths, thousands of injuries, and an estimated 6 billion dollars in property damage. It was the largest earthquake to occur on the San Andreas Fault since the great San Francisco earthquake in April 1906.
The Loma Prieta quake was similar to Tuesday’s earthquake in China in depth, but its magnitude was 7.1 on the Richter scale, compared to the Minglou quake at 6.5.

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On May 19, 2011, 20:20 o'clock divides in the Minglou County has 6.5-magnitude of earthquakes, in 1989, the Loma Prieta Earthquake shook the San Francisco and Monterey Bay regions.

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