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Nowadays, every time when we watch TV, listen to the radio, etc. Most all the media is flowed with advertisement, especially on TV, the advertisement appear either before a TV program or after it, and sometimes even inserted between episodes of a TV serial plays. With the time of which become longer and longer, I think most of advertisement are so boring, and I cannot wait but switch to other channels.
In order to attract more customers and make more profit, businessmen use advertisement as a tool for promoting their goods and improving the sales amount in such a highly competitive market. Putting advertisement on TV program is completely two sided, because the TV station can earn money to support their program while businessmen show their advertisement on TV, which is good for both them. However, what about the audience? Do they consider what they like to watch or not? My answer is NO!
Today’s advertisement, try to get consumers to buy certain brands. Organizers of advertisement are so skillful and tricky to attempt to persuade customers to wear a certain kind of clothing, a special kind of chocolate, or use a high-quality utensil. Some customers are easily to be persuaded and buy without careful consideration, and sometimes after buying, they regret that they buy a pig in the poke.
Nevertheless, advertising makes a positive contribution to our pockets. Newspapers, commercial radio and television companies could not subsist without this source of revenue. It is true that we pay so little for our daily paper, and can enjoy so many broadcast and TV programs are due entirely to the money spent by advertisers. It is useful and convenient for consumers that advertisement shows some reliable and useful information about products. Furthermore, sometimes from reading advertisement, we can get favorable products with a discount.
Advertising becomes more and more popular, competitive. To be more effective among a large number of advertisements, the best one must be exciting, entertaining, or providing pleasure. The secret of organizing a advertising is promoting a innovative idea as well as benefiting consumers in a target market. For example, an ad says eating this kind of chocolate will make a person do well in sport. That chocolate brand may sell well if consumers think it offers strength and energy.
I long for that more and more ads can promote a deep insight into human nature, or call for everybody to protect environment, care for elderly and give love to orphans, which will make great contribution to everyone. Advertisement, is a device for promoting usefulness, sincerity, and love.

Cinderella

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