Meditatation on The Disabled

苏洪钊

On wednsday evening,the Paralympic Games came to the successful end with the torch gradually fading out,numerous eyes from the world focusing on the Bird’s Nest and wonderful fireworks lightening the sky above Beijing.Though Paralynpics Game is over,the spirit will still reverberate in everyong’s heart.The dream “One World,One Dream”became the reality.
For these disabled athletes ,to attend the Paralympic Games was the best present God visit so that they never gave up until the last moment.Based on the spirit of this meeting,they gave us the best competitions fairly and peacefully.Even losting the games,they would stand on their feets soon and congratulated the winner.They are the pride of their countise and their peoples.Here no conflicts and wars exist but peace in this 11-day brand meeting,which is the blueprint the world has been imagining.It is sports that has this mysterious power to solidify the world like this.
I am moved,deeply moved by disabled athletes’ mind,for they have to make much more unimaginable efforts than normal athletes do.Behind every disabled athlete there is always a quite unpleasant even anguish story.How difficult the process is to defeat themseves and then perform well in this big stage.why do they spend on effort to join this meeting?Because they want to earn respect form us rather than only sympathy and reputation。They have been contempted by the society for so long.By this meeting,they prove that they can overcome difficulties just as the normal despite disabilities and they are equal to the normal.
Every Paralympic Games didn’t get as much attention as the summer Olympic Games and was held after the summer Olympic Games rather than at the same time. What does it mean?It means the disabled were not still of equality to the normal.Here is one point and the other point is as following.
As the reality in China,thousands of disabled people are swept away from the streets to the desert lest they damage the appearance of the city.Life is so humble.How stressing a fact is.
And you? Have you evercontempted the disabled around you?Have you ever covered your nose when passing by the disabled?Have you ever given you hand to the disabled?
To summarize what I have said:disabled athletes are very tough in this Paralympics Games,they are equal to the normal and they get enough respect.


[ 本帖最后由 苏洪钊 于 2008-9-20 20:24 编辑 ]

Cinderella

Meditatation on The Disabled
They are the pride of their countise and their peoples._________?
why do they spend on effort to join this meeting?Because they want to earn respect form us rather than only sympathy and reputation_________spare no effort? from us?
________all typing mistakes, seems you are a little careless.

I'm really glad that you can contemplate the fate of those disabled, but as a composition, the ideas don't seem to have been arranged in a very good sequence. And your sympathy seems a little abrupt since you are talking about the tough spirit of the disabled athletes. Of course I understand there is some relation between them, yet you should have pointed the logic out in your passage. Hope next time I'll read a better one.