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Discrimination Against Women

发表于 2008-5-11 22:11:22 | 显示全部楼层

A good copy of a composition for Band 4 examination, i shall say.

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发表于 2008-5-13 20:21:53 | 显示全部楼层

The title is not consistent with the content. Maybe "Discrimination Against Women" is better.

The first paragraph should be rewritten for the sentences are not grammatically correct.

Anyway this passage is much better than the previous one.

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