Success in My Mind

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Today I am very glad to be here to share with you my ideas of success. What is success? It is what everyone is longing for. Sometimes success would be rather simple. Winning a game is success; getting a high grade in the exam is success; making a new friend is success; even now I am standing here giving my speech is somehow also success.

   However, as a person’s whole life is concerned, success becomes very
complicat . Is fortune success? Is famous person success? Is high social status success? No, I don’t think so. I believe success is the realization of people’
s hopes and ideals. Nowadays, in the modern society there are many people
who are regarded as a successful. And the most obvious characterister of them are money, high position and luxurious life. So more people believe that success and all that they do is for this purpose. But the problem is wether it is real success. We all know there are always more money, higher position and better condition in front of us. If we keep chasing them, where is the end? What will satisfy with us at last? Therefore, we can see, to get the real success we must need something inside, which is the realisation of people’ hopes and ideals.

   Different people have different ideas about success; cause people’s hopes and ideas vary from one to another. But I am sure every success is dear to everybody, cause it is not easy to come by, cause in the process of our heeding for success, we got both our body and soul tried, meanwhile we are enlightened by the most valuable qualities of human beings: love, patient, courage and sense of responsibility. These are the best treasures. So now I am very proud that I have this opportunity to stand here speaking to all of you. It is my success, cause I raised up to challenge my hope.

   What is success? Everyone has his own interpretation as I do. But I am sure
every success leads to an ever-brighter future. So ladies and gentlemen, believe in our hopes, believe in ourselves, we, every one of us, can make a successful life!
   Wish you all success!
   Thanks so much!

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shifting of the pronouns makes me dizzy.... It seemed that I have understood what you're driving at when I finished the first two paragraphs, but then .... then I reread this passage twice and tried to make clear the logic.  still I'm at a loss...