2011.09.19第三次汉译英

0903小雨

After a while, her friend added,” You’re too straightforward to play a trick on me. So please be honest and tell me if your mood is still what it was in April. My wishes and feelings remain the same. One word from you and I shall never put this subject forward again.”
   Elizabeth, feeling all the more than common awkwardness and anxiety of his situation, now forced herself to speak; and immediately, though not very fluently, gave him to understand that her sentiments had undergone so material a change, since the period to which he alluded, as to make her receive with gratitude and pleasure his present assurances.

Joy

After a short period of time, her friend added, "You are too generous to trifle with me. If your feelings are still what they were last April, tell me so at once. My affections and wishes are unchanged, but one word from you will make me silence on this subject for ever."
Hearing his words, Elizabeth felt all the more than common awkwardness and anxiety and now forced herself to speak. Immediately, although not very fluently, she gave him to understand that her sentiments had undergone so huge the change, since the period to which he mentioned, as to make her receive with gratitude and pleasure his present assurances. The reply made him so hanppy, and it seemed that he had probably never felt before; and he expressed himself on the occasion as sensibly and as warmly as a man violently in love can be supposed to do.

pengwenato

After a while, only said her friend：“you are too straightforward a person too make fun of me. Please tell me honestly whether your feeling is still as in April. My wish and feeling is the same and only if you say the sentence, I will never talk about it again.”
Hearing him express his feeling, Elisabeth was getting more nervous and anxious about him and couldn’t help but started to say something. She hesitated to tell him that her feeling’ changed a lot since he brought up the topic just now and she is ready to accept his good intention with a slight heart now. The answer seemed like the happiness he’d never had before and like a fervent lover, he took the opportunity to talk to her heartedly.