Pay more attention to your health

薇姿兰霜

Pay more attention to your health
In this quick fix society, more and more people are too busy to pay attention to their health, while some people sacrifice their health for the purpose of beauty .In a word, health is always ignored.
Some people always have endless work to do. They don’t have enough time to have meals. The fast food is always their first choice. Then most of them are lack of nutrition. Even worse, they couldn’t get enough sleep so that Premier Zhou enlai’s illness was brought about on by overwork. What a pity for our Chinese people to lose such an excellent leader!
However, at the same time, many people spend most of their time enjoying their life without doing anything meaningful so that they also become ill. They eat very much everyday but do not consume the calorie they have absorbed in, so they get some kinds of illness and end up their lives in hospital.
Even more astonishingly, some people sacrifice their health for their figure. In order to become slim, they keep on a diet and do excessive sports everyday so that they look very pale and unenergetic. Lacking of energy, they couldn’t exert themselves in their work. Some of them even get some illness in stomach. What’s worse, some even died. It was reported a few days ago in the newspaper that an English girl got the anorexia nervosa because of over controlling in eating and drinking. She ate very little, or rather, almost nothing everyday and forced herself to walk twelve hour from 6 am to 6 pm. After sometime her weight reduced to 19 kilograms and looked like a human skeleton. Doctor said that if she continues not to eat normally, she may die! How stupid a girl! It really didn’t worth doing such a thing only for the purpose of losing weight. Everyone wants to be more beautiful; however, you should always put health in the first place!
What I want to say to you is that you must pay more attention to your health. If you love your work so much, you should relax sometimes in order to store enough energy for your work. If you really have very good appetite, you should control yourself not to eat more than you need so that you can become healthier. If you care about your figure so much, please always remember to put your health in the first place during the period of losing weight. Health is really very important to every one of us. Please pay more attention!
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郭巧丽
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1 improve this:
so that Premier Zhou enlai’s illness was brought about on by overwork.

2 too wordy, make it concise.

3 design an intriguing beginning. readjust your content and structure and I think it will be a better speech.