新闻仿写 2012

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2012
                  -----the end of the past
  The human race suffers a great crisis
  The number has been added to 100,000 till now because of shin cancer caused by the huge crack all over the ozone layer.
Tt has been realized that the magnetic field is flipping, and at the same time sunspots activate again after 11 years' slience. Our earth suffers from such a crisis happened millions years years ago when dinosaurs gets extinct from properity.
   T he united nations called for a meeting among heads of all world-influcing countries aiming at finding out how to surive in this crisis for all human beings. president hu and president Obama agreed on we should move from surface of the planet to underground,which cause great contraversy. Most European countries insist staying at the surface.
   It is a disaster for our human race. Failure to adapt to stong Ultraviolet rays, unsteadly changed weather and unexpected flood makes only the man who moved to underground survive. the rest of survivors about 1 billion agree to form a temperary committee in charge of world affairs. President Obama claimed that " we will and must survive."

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Not bad

Our earth suffers from such a crisis happened millions years years ago when dinosaurs gets extinct from properity.

Such a crisis only occurred millions of years ago which drove the dinosaurs extinct. (Is this better?)

To maintain your sentence order, it must be "Our earth suffered from such a crisis which took place only millions of years ago when dinosaurs got extinct from prosperity overnight."_ seems awkward...