Internet

admin

How about rewriting it in this way:

Internet has become one essential part of our everday life. Every morning after we get up, maybe the first thing we do is to log on and surf on the Internet: either listen to music or read some news or receive mails or chat with friends in different countries. we QQ on net, we blog on net, we Msn on net, we buy and sell on net, we even make friends or get married through net!

It is for this that the internet is overcriticized. So many people get addicted to it and can never tear themselves apart from it. Yet anyone in his right mind knows there is nothing wrong with internet if internet is used correctly. What's more, the benefits of internet are far bigger than its side effects. For example, in our study, it’s so useful to get huge amount of information which can not be easily found from the books. Scientists from all over the world can work together through the internet on the same subject. Banks could use internet to share the information which are convenient for our lives.

We also should look into the future,internet will change a lot and bound with people’s lives more tightly. Everywhere can be our home, and the internet can do this for us. For instance, you can do your work and share the beautiful memories with your family members and friends wherever you are.Your family also can control your home electronics and furniture by contacting with the internet no matter where you are. The Internet also likes a free kingdom where everyone could express themselves freely. Hopefully, with the passing of time, internet can do much better for us. (shift of pronoun in this para, please correct and improve it yourself)

Internet makes, has made, and will make everything possible.

admin

I only readjust your structure. you can improve the passage yourself.