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Reader
liuxiang
Reading Time
2025.3.29
Reading Task
Pages 1-143, Part One: Unnecessary word
Summary of the Content
This section mainly focuses on "unnecessary words" and explains various situations where unnecessary words are used in writing. This may include redundant vocabulary, ideographic repetitive vocabulary, etc. Analyze how they make the text sluggish, vague, and affect effective communication of information. Show through specific examples which words or phrases are redundant in a sentence, and how to use words accurately to improve the clarity and conciseness of writing.
Evaluation
The writing style tends to be practical guidance, with clear organization and rich case studies, making it easy for readers to understand and compare their own writing situation. Having a clear theme and focusing on the key point of vocabulary simplification in writing is highly targeted for improving writing quality. In terms of ideology, emphasizing concise and efficient expression concepts has corrected the habit of unconsciously accumulating vocabulary in many people's writing, which helps cultivate more precise and professional writing thinking.
Reflection
In daily writing, I often fall into the trap of piling up vocabulary, thinking that using more fancy or complex words can make the article more brilliant, but ignoring that simplicity is the key to effectively conveying information. After reading this section, I realized the need to approach every word with greater caution and avoid redundancy. In future writing, whether it's work emails, copywriting, or other types of writing, we will focus on simplifying vocabulary, making expression more direct and powerful, enhancing the professionalism and readability of writing, and avoiding obstacles to information transmission caused by unnecessary vocabulary.