In Defense of Cafferty

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The America Declaration of Independence said that all men are created equal. But it seems to the westerners that we are “basically the same bunch of goons and thugs they’ve been for the last 50 years” just as the CNN host Cafferty has said, so they never treated us equally and just. It seems to them that any riots happened in China was caused by China’s inhumanity treatment to the public mass. It seems to them that the minority of China is under the military control of the PRC, which is always a communist monarchy party, and rule an ignorant country with high pressure. It seems that we Chinese are humble and uncivilized as they always considered us to be. So we do not deserve the word equal. And the truth is that they never treated us equally.

Some American always clamor that Tibet is not a part of China, but we all see that how America extended its 13 states to 50 states with money and massacre, while Tibet as is known to the world that is an indivisible part of china since the ancient china. The America always clamors that they are a nation of human rights and democracy, while there are so many young students died of gun shut but the carrying of a gun is still legal. The America always clamors them to be protector of peace while they started the war affair all around the world. That is the America creeds and the American deeds. And that is also what the westerners were following, the NATO, implanting its role of the world police all over the world under the name of humanitarianism.

We can understand that the westerners called the Chinese products junk while they are enjoying the cheap and high quality goods made in china. We can understand that the westerners express their support for the Tibet mobs while their battle plane are hovering on other countries airspace because that is what they are always dong ¬–blantaly intrusion of other countries internal affair. We can understand that their unauthentic reports on the Tibet riots on the excuse printer's error, because they has the human rights of free speech. And we can understand that all just for our Chinese’s tolerance, just for the hope of that they can understand us for return, just for the sake of world peace. We Chinese are people of tolerance and peace lover.

One world, one dream, that is our Olympic theme and also the world people’s ultimate dream. We have done our best to host the Olympic game as a world people’s party with our heart. And we have stood all the unreasonable criticize and all the inurbane deeds of those extremer just for a successful Olympic game of the whole human society. If they go on with those inurbane deeds , then hell is the ultimate reality for them.


0508    21号

admin

well use of parallelism

i just don't like the last para. It seems a little off point with the previous paragraphs.

My suggestion for you: "One world, one dream. Our dream is to make China a peaceful land, and the world a peaceful heaven. Our dream is to eliminate all these obstacles and to build a harmonious global village. Our dream is that one day, all of us, being rid of hatred and all human evils, will stand shoulder by shoulder. The 2008 Olympic Games is only one symbol for unity, and we shall go all out to make it a beautiful reality in Beijing!

徐柳

You know your speech reminds me of a composition done by Mr. Yang's teacher, whose name seems to be "In Defense of ..." but wriiten in an ironic way. I appreciate the originality of  your reasoning and the impressiveness of the sentence structure.