《中式英语之鉴》2

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Reader:李艳梅
Reading Time:一周
Reading Task:Saying the Same Thing Twice
Summary of the Content: Redundancy refers to the unnecessary repetition of words or ideas that do not add new meaning to a sentence. It often makes sentences wordy and less effective.
Evaluation：The writing style is rigorous, the content is natural and fluent, and the issue of redundant expression is discussed.
Reflection: We can improve the clarity and effectiveness of their English writing.
Main content：
1. Definition of Redundancy
Redundancy refers to the unnecessary repetition of words or ideas that do not add new meaning to a sentence. It often makes sentences wordy and less effective.
Example of Redundancy:
The government should take effective measures to control and regulate the market.
(Here, "control" and "regulate" are similar in meaning, so one of them is redundant.)
Improved Version:
The government should take effective measures to regulate the market.
2. Common Types of Redundancy
The book highlights several types of redundant expressions:
a. Synonym Repetition
Using two or more words with similar meanings in the same sentence.
b. Redundant Modifiers
Using modifiers that repeat the meaning already implied by the main word.
c. Overemphasis
Repeating words or using unnecessary intensifiers to emphasize a point.

3. Causes of Redundancy
The book explains why redundancy often occurs in Chinglish:
a. Influence of Chinese Language Habits
Chinese often uses parallel structures or repetition for emphasis, which can lead to redundancy when translated into English.
b. Lack of Familiarity with English Vocabulary
Learners may use multiple words to ensure clarity, not realizing that one word is sufficient.
c. Overemphasis
Learners may repeat words or ideas to stress a point, but this often weakens the sentence.
4. How to Avoid Redundancy
The book provides practical tips to eliminate redundancy:
a. Simplify Language
Use concise expressions and avoid unnecessary repetition.
b. Understand Word Meanings
Ensure that each word used has a unique meaning and avoid overlapping synonyms.
c. Read and Write More
Exposure to native English materials and consistent writing practice can help develop a sense of natural, concise expression.
5. Impact of Redundancy
Redundancy not only makes sentences longer but also weakens their clarity and effectiveness. Concise sentences are more direct and impactful, while redundant ones can confuse or bore readers.